Progress

I have 5 of the 14 pages revised, each with at least 10 new lines, and most with a few more. It is important to be sure these are quality additions, and not merely filler. Most have been insights on the characters or the situation with setting info sprinkled in to ground the action into the story world. This chapter is dialogue heavy and needed the balance with the other story elements.

I'm done for today, but tomorrow I plan to plow back into the action.