Chapter 3 revisions done

What an emotional drain! I made the 5 extra page goal easily, which is important. I'm really pleased with the changes in this chapter. My main character about went into shock, but we both survived the ordeal of discovering the victim's body. This is much imporved from the original version where she rises to the occation without breaking a sweat.

I hope that I am starting to get in the grove and the remaining 13 chapters of revision and 4 brand new chapters will start to flow faster than a chapter a week.