Friday, September 27, 2002


I managed to revise another couple pages in chapter 1 and typed in all the changes. I am only slightly over a page short of my goal to add 5 pages to this chapter. I'm making a lot of changes and adding a lot of new and more vivid setting details. I really think the story is much stronger for it. I would do more, but it is late and I'm beat-down tired.