Sunday, November 10, 2002

Getting Closer

Of the two pages of revision notes, one is now completely crossed off with pink highlighter (my way of marking something as completed). The other page is mostly pinked-out. The remaining comments include "The scenario is too mechanics heavy", "Backstory is the more important aspect of the NPC", "Challenge ratings are too high", and a request for more detail on a prisoner transfer that is a possible outcome. I feel that I have dealt with all these matters, but I want to double check.